don't post in the main story thread please (it'll look cluttered and annoying), but leave any suggestions and feedback here.
I'll make sure to integrate anything I can.
don't post in the main story thread please (it'll look cluttered and annoying), but leave any suggestions and feedback here.
I'll make sure to integrate anything I can.
CRITIQUE
desperate: yes
creative: yes
publishable: YES
but aren't they asking for it anyway?
The one day i actually
wake up in time to go to college.
.
oops
i mean
:D
"Vikram smirked and held his belly up a little to look."
:D
:`D
your copy/paste skills are good
orly
Please stop.
actually, I've bothered to read it now.
Carry on!
No need to watch telly ever again
But I feel embarrassed for Mirri. I think she's lost it.
i havent watched hollyoaks
in a couple of days and i dont even miss it
Me neither!
I read in News Of The World that Mirri was going to seduce Vikram...THEN KILL HIM.
then she will
start shagging his dad or something
too try hard and not that funny
sorry
^ This
I felt not enough was put into developing these klaire and bamos characters you mentioned
i'm a fan
true story
Leave it now folks eh
^this
Is this real 'Washing Dirty Laundry in public' or a 'Joke'?
more please!
Oops sorry
seriously it was just amjazing
You should write for mills & boon.
sleep now
part 2 later
possibly the best thing i've ever read on this here internet
apologies to all concerned
Whoops, my bad
Fucking fucking brilliant.
It's somehow
the best worst thing I've read.
Marvellous.
Not enough explosions in it
Or tits...
I'll wait for the Michael Bay sequel.
By far the greatest thing I've ever read
Well done Sir.
Casting ideas for a Dogme95 film adaptation?
GO!