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Leave feedback on the (official) VikramMirri Story here please

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by DramaHammer

don't post in the main story thread please (it'll look cluttered and annoying), but leave any suggestions and feedback here.

I'll make sure to integrate anything I can.

DramaHammer | 15 May '08, 05:45 | Send note | Report this | Reply

CRITIQUE

desperate: yes
creative: yes
publishable: YES

but aren't they asking for it anyway?


The one day i actually

wake up in time to go to college.


.

oops

i mean

:D


No need to watch telly ever again

But I feel embarrassed for Mirri. I think she's lost it.


i havent watched hollyoaks

in a couple of days and i dont even miss it


Me neither!

I read in News Of The World that Mirri was going to seduce Vikram...THEN KILL HIM.


then she will

start shagging his dad or something


^ This

I felt not enough was put into developing these klaire and bamos characters you mentioned


more please!


Oops sorry

seriously it was just amjazing


sleep now

part 2 later


Whoops, my bad

Fucking fucking brilliant.


It's somehow

the best worst thing I've read.
Marvellous.


Not enough explosions in it

Or tits...

I'll wait for the Michael Bay sequel.


By far the greatest thing I've ever read

Well done Sir.